Can I get your opinions?
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Can I get your opinions?
Can I get you guys opinion on this?:
- Ginto8
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Re: Can I get your opinions?
Well it's a decent start for a sprite, but the first thing that really jumps out at me is that he seems to be looking slightly upward.
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its a little bit 'flat' looking. maybe add some shading (to give the head and torso shape) although this would add more colors to the pallette
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I'm not any great pixel artist myself, but i think the shape of the body should be more organic, also in the 3rd dimension(shading).
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I tweaked it a bit, but I still don't think it looks that great...
EDIT:
...Or much diffrent to the last
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Perhaps add a bit of a smile? He seems a bit depressed to me.
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try and not make depressed emo looking mafukaz?
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Re: Can I get your opinions?
Good start, needs more detail in general.
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Re: Can I get your opinions?
You should try to put his eyes a bit down. In the center of the face or maybe a few pixels below.
The different shades are a bit too similar. And it looks like you don't have any highlights.
You should always have at least 3 different shades for each color: a ground, one for shadows, and one for highlights
The different shades are a bit too similar. And it looks like you don't have any highlights.
You should always have at least 3 different shades for each color: a ground, one for shadows, and one for highlights
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I tried giving him a smile to make him look less emo but then he looks kinda like a psychopath
Tried adding some colors and a shadow etc, I'm not to sure though
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look at something like this http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/tutorials.asp?id=2254
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Thanks mank1net1k wrote:look at something like this http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/tutorials.asp?id=2254
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The colors are dull.
Lacks any form of shading or contrast.
The shapes are inorganic and have ugly edges between them.
Try harder.
Lacks any form of shading or contrast.
The shapes are inorganic and have ugly edges between them.
Try harder.
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Troll harder. Btw I have your mom's panties, could you give them back to her?pubby8 wrote:The colors are dull.
Lacks any form of shading or contrast.
The shapes are inorganic and have ugly edges between them.
Try harder.
/trolling
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eatcomics wrote:Troll harder. Btw I have your mom's panties, could you give them back to her?pubby8 wrote:The colors are dull.
Lacks any form of shading or contrast.
The shapes are inorganic and have ugly edges between them.
Try harder.
/trolling