Elysian Shadows

Aight...Here it is. I ha1fasses the entire ending, as I'm sure you can te11. Any he1p making it better or hunting out some of the obvious grammatica1 or spe11ing errors wou1d be high1y appreciated!

edit: New attachment w/ tab1e of contents

edit edit: A few more corrections made. The ending needs serious work (iterative deve1opment). Was pu11ed out of my ass because I thought I had to have it in yesterday...Suggestions/he1p wanted/needed. Thanks. =p

Unfortunately, I'm too tired to finish. I got everything except for purpose. This is supposed to be the most important part, but it was by far your shittiest. I wrote 3 paragraphs to introduce the project. I kept yours several lines farther down so that you can add any important information that your previous purpose had to mine... though there wasn't too much of it. Repost when you're done.

Awesome, great work.

I basically took your additions to the purpose, added the last paragraph from my original one, and discarded the rest. I probably could have done a bit more, but I didn't get your update until about 6 am. Great job, I noticed an assload of changes, mostly adding to clarity.

Has anybody else here bothered to read this? What do you think? It's supposed to be a 'research outline' and is being submitted with all my paperwork and my abstract. Luckily, it's not one of the most important parts of the project, but I think it will be modified and shown off in the notebook at the actual presentation.

Fuck. Fair is soon.

-slighly modified-

Looks snazzy. It's nice to see a little bit more in-depth how ther editor works. Once again, good luck with the fair, and make sure you take the camera, damnit!

It's over.

Oh snap.

/own.

I find out what exactly I won tomorrow (only know that I won something. ;p)

....aaaand.

There is a strong chance that there is exclusive footage of Marcel's presentation at the fair. There's also a chance that my mom, dad, 5-year old brother, new girlfriend, and Marcel's girlfriend make guest appearances.

Chapter 16 is coming, gents.

GyroVorbis wrote:Chapter 16 is coming, gents.

OMG I CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111oneoneone

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WOW.

They liked my presentation quite a bit. I really wracked up those awards. ;p

Complete, so destickied.

So you're not going to tell us what you won? Or are you making us wait until chapter 16, so you can wave your awards in front of the camera and show off?

In any case, congratulations.

Yeah, congratulations Marcel! Great to hear your work payed off. Can't wait to see Chapter 16

You know the "type with 1's instead of l's"? Well, I tried that, and it wasn't working... so me, being a dumbass, stickytacked a thumbtack to the L key. And guess what? Now i'm bleeding. XD

Dunno if I should re sticky this because of the international one coming up? Eh, probably not with the new album system and stuff--can get out all the info that way.

Anyway, I'll probably begin using this thread again shortly. And is this a shadow thread in private dev that I'm posting from, or did it somehow get moved? (can you normal folks see what I'm typing? haha)

This is awesome arce. Hope you win more deserved loot.