Elysian Shadows

I turned this paper in today--Wonder waht the teacher'll make of it...

Bear in mind, it's all true. Replace Falco with Gyro.

http://thechaosrift.com/CurfewComplete.doc

We've got to send one story in to be bound by real publishers this year in our gay required 9th grade class, so I'm likely to use this one..However, the teacher might force me to use this:

http://thechaosrift.com/BlimpTragedy.doc

((second one was done before school the day it was due--Ignore typos and gramatical errors, as well as spelling, and overall storyline stupidity and timeline flaws; it hasn't been edited yet. And, frankly, I don't give a shit if I get a bad grade on those two papers, I have a solid 100 in there and think I can allow my grade to take some battering))

I liked the first one. Didn't read the second yet

To be completely honest...The second isn't worth reading. Don't even try. It was just a bit of a quickie to satisfy my teach ((shun those who understood the dirty humar))

*hand to heart in horror*

you turned that into the teacher with all those errors!!!!???

i thikn the split up scene should have been exagerated with some fancy actoin stunts, quick diversions, daring moves, and ended with an unexpected plot twist with plenty of room for a sequel.
it was deffinatly unique

Ha ha. I only read the first one. damn, good times. But you should put the end. remember?

Put the end? WTF? I did....I think posted an old version then--I have a completed version somewhere....Lemme find a link in a few.

Yeah when like the cop got your mom and dad up and shit.

It was pretty much the best thing ever. You lived in Utah? or was it Ohio?

Utah, lol. Again, lemme get the link.

The ending isn't exactly how it happened like the rest is, but it's close enough. ((I thought 7 pages was long enough, because the assignment was only for 2. =) ))

Allright, I fixed the link to the completed version.

Again, there are still erros, and I'll fix it sometime later. Oh well.

For those of you too lazy to scroll up, just click here:

http://TheChaosRift.com/CurfewComplete.doc

Ha ha! That was so tight! damn dude. I'm impressed. But I think you used the word: cliche in the wrong manner a couple of times. Like it didn't make sense with the sentance. But, other than that. Bravo.

Yeah, I know. My mom edited it for me a few days ago, and apparently she changed Clique to Cliche' or w/e, and I didn't catch it until recently. O.o;;

Too lazy to fix it atm, the copy I turned in has it fixed, so don't worry. It's just the one I uploaded to show you guys that has it fucked.

Okay i don't kno why but it won't work when i try to vote on your poll.. like it knos I'm not 18 or something,,,,,,,,,,,,, but i will turn in my edited version to you before May 20th.

BTW, you don't have to be 18 to vote on it. =P

If you already voted on your account ((maybe you got haxed!?!?!?)) then it won't let you again.

Huh... That must be it. Someone's out to get me.