We've got to send one story in to be bound by real publishers this year in our gay required 9th grade class, so I'm likely to use this one..However, the teacher might force me to use this:
((second one was done before school the day it was due--Ignore typos and gramatical errors, as well as spelling, and overall storyline stupidity and timeline flaws; it hasn't been edited yet. And, frankly, I don't give a shit if I get a bad grade on those two papers, I have a solid 100 in there and think I can allow my grade to take some battering))
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To be completely honest...The second isn't worth reading. Don't even try. It was just a bit of a quickie to satisfy my teach ((shun those who understood the dirty humar))
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you turned that into the teacher with all those errors!!!!???
i thikn the split up scene should have been exagerated with some fancy actoin stunts, quick diversions, daring moves, and ended with an unexpected plot twist with plenty of room for a sequel.
it was deffinatly unique
The ending isn't exactly how it happened like the rest is, but it's close enough. ((I thought 7 pages was long enough, because the assignment was only for 2. =) ))
Ha ha! That was so tight! damn dude. I'm impressed. But I think you used the word: cliche in the wrong manner a couple of times. Like it didn't make sense with the sentance. But, other than that. Bravo.
Okay i don't kno why but it won't work when i try to vote on your poll.. like it knos I'm not 18 or something,,,,,,,,,,,,, but i will turn in my edited version to you before May 20th.
