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Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:29 pm
by MarauderIIC
Ready? Go!
Also yes, MY PHONE MY EMAIL MY ADDRESS isn't like that in the actual resume :)
updated attachment
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:38 pm
by Ginto8
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:49 pm
by trufun202
Looks great man.
My only suggestion would be to add a Technology Experience section - listing languages/technologies that you've worked with. (C/C++, C#, Lua, OpenGL, Javascript, HTML, etc.)
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:50 pm
by MarauderIIC
Should I remove them from my summary if I do that?
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:52 pm
by trufun202
MarauderIIC wrote:Should I remove them from my summary if I do that?
Well, "Seven years of experience with C++, familiar with Linux and version control, proficient with Microsoft Visual Studio," might be a bit too high level.
I think that's good for the summary, but maybe get more detailed in the Tech Experience section. Something so that the person reading it can get a complete rundown of what you're capable of doing.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:56 pm
by trufun202
I would also like to point out that it's one page - which is great. That and your references page is all you should have.
I've conducted interviews where ppl have like 6 page resumes...thats a bad thing.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:58 pm
by MarauderIIC
Alright. But if I add tech experience (and where do you think it should go), it''ll probably bump it to two pages. I can cut the less relevant professional history, perhaps? Lab tech, domino's, courier work (probably)? Not sure.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:59 pm
by avansc
i havent read it, purly because i havent installed word onto my pc. but you state in your resume that you have been programming since you were 11.
i would leave that out. only state when you started at college level, or perhaps if you took AP computer science in school.
possible employers might think your a weirdo if you specifically put age 11 in you resume.
ps: once again im just going off a reply i read.... so dont kill me if im wrong.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:01 pm
by MarauderIIC
Also, for a(n engineering) career fair, should I attach a reference page to the resume? Thanks guys =)
(also
http://elysianshadows.com/phpBB3/viewto ... 193#p35193 )
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:04 pm
by avansc
MarauderIIC wrote:Also, for a(n engineering) career fair, should I attach a reference page to the resume? Thanks guys =)
yes. online references to your resume is a very powerful tool.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:16 pm
by sparda
Pretty nice. I like it. Although I'd have to agree with trufun on this one. You should have a section or two that lists your entire (or most) of your repertoire of skills. Naturally, you can just purge the less techie job descriptions, and add more relevant sections. Perhaps, like so:
TECHNICAL SKILLS
Programming Languages: C/C++, Python, Lua, XML, x86 Assembly, Pascal, Perl, JavaScript, Java, HTML, and UML.
Operating Systems: Windows XP/Vista, UNIX, Mac OS X, Linux (Ubuntu, Fedora, YDL).
Software Packages: MS-Visual Studio, GNU Compiler Collection, Xcode, Code::Blocks, Adobe CS4 Flash, , SVN, CVS, Adobe CS4 Photoshop.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:26 pm
by MarauderIIC
Updated the attachment in the original post, but I'm probably going to print here in a minute.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:44 pm
by MarauderIIC
I had a suggestion to add all other relevant CS coursework (instead of the highest level stuff), opinions? It'd definitely make it >1 page.
edit: also dan suggests tech experience above education
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 8:52 pm
by dandymcgee
MarauderIIC wrote:I had a suggestion to add all other relevant CS coursework (instead of the highest level stuff), opinions? It'd definitely make it >1 page.
edit: also dan suggests tech experience above education
As far as relevant coursework perhaps put it on the second page and sort of reference it from the first page. That way it's available if the reader is interested but not in their way if they don't care so much.
As for the tech experience, I pointed out that that's the first think I would be looking for on a resume, and I like how you bolded it to make it stand out. As long as it's relatively easy to find.
Re: Critique my resume!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 9:29 pm
by trufun202
Doh! I can't read your resume at home, I still only have my student edition of Office 2000. :P
Although, if you're sending this out, you might want to consider saving it in a previous version of Word. Not everyone (like my cheapass) can open .docx files.